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Re: The Garden
Thanks guys, love the comments. This has definitely been the hardest part of the story for me to write so far. I'll be posting the first chapter or two soon, ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Osaka Tales
INT. BARGE CABIN - NIGHT The inner-cabin of the barge has been rebuilt to accommodate it's purpose; several circular tables have been set up, all of which are occupied by ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Soliloquy of a God
See, you're hitting on it. The idea is that Metatron will make us into gods someday, just not the gods we want to be. Like, we're not literally going to ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Soliloquy of a God
I purposely made it vague, rather than just giving you the message. It's called subtlety. Sometimes you need to look beyond the surface of art to see it's inherent meaning. ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Soliloquy of a God
The idea is that Metatron is basically all of humanity reflecting back upon itself. It's the "voice of god", created by men, to make them into gods. But the point ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Gnosis
Thanks for the input! This was actually a poem I had to write for school, and I thought it would be funny to intertwine lots of inappropriate innuendos (I attended ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Down in the Valley
I'm surprised you guys thought it sounded so much like a song, it wasn't really my intent. Thanks for the critiquing! I don't write poetry much at all, and when ...
Dec 2, 2008
